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11 March 2008 @ 04:18 pm
Survival Take One: Failure Rate  
Title: Survival Take One: Failure Rate

Author: x_los

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Seven/Ainley!Master

Summary: Crack!Response to Survival. The Master employs amazing long-term pick-up strategies, at the expense of the Doctor's sanity and Bernaz the Sentient Muskrat of Woe.

Beta: The lovely bagheera_san , who made this much more fun.

A/N: While bagheera_san  joked that "the serious!fic could be the sequel to this! Which would be both comic and tragic," which was actually pretty awesome, they're written as detached, non-linear perspectives.


Failure Rate



Survival Take One







Sometime after thwacking his nemesis over the head with a bone the Master began to regret his abrupt decision to embrace his animal instincts. The Cheetah, while a fun crowd, lacked a lot in the way of metallic embroidery and ships capable of four-dimensional travel. They couldn’t support him in the lifestyle to which he’d become accustomed. Additionally, the Doctor was an awfully heavy armful, and without technology the Master was having a less than pleasant stroll. But this planet would serve his purposes for the time being, and he consoled himself with the knowledge that he was going to really enjoy at least one aspect of slumming it for the next few weeks.



He and the Doctor’s unconscious body had relocated with the rest of the Cheetah to Omega knew where, probably even further away from his poor lost TARDIS. She would be so cross when they were finally reunited that he’d have to install a whole new operating system just to get her to shut up about it and stop simultaneously flushing all of her toilets while he was showering. Which might seem a mundane issue, but the Time Lords had long ago opted to perfect vortex manipulation, giving up on ever understanding the more subtle vagaries of plumbing. He himself had been trying to redo his spare bathroom for well over a century.



The Doctor began to stir, and the Master quickly dusted off his black suit and concentrated on perfecting the ‘charmingly smarmy’ to ‘death-by-cyanide-rictus’ ratio of his smile. He tossed his thwacking-bone around a bit, just to occupy his hands. The Doctor coughed, wetly and unsexily, and rolled over to squint blearily at the Master.



“Are you ill?” the Doctor asked with a puzzled frown. Ah. Too many teeth, then. The Master opened his mouth to deliver cutting invective, something memorable like, “I am sick… of looking at you!” or “Only mentally!” but his wit was tragically curtailed, smothered in its cradle by the Doctor cutting in, bogarting the last word as usual.



“Did you— you did. You knocked me out. You knocked me out with a pony thighbone. Why, on wherever the hell we are, did you feel it necessary to desiccate a pony skeleton to smash my skull in?”



“Your thick skull is fine--”



“Where did you even get a pony?!”



“The kittlings bring back strange things!” The Master was defensive. The Cheetah, for all their faults, were some of the best hench-creatures he’d had all century. “Do you know how many random homeless people they fetched before managing to get it right and find you? Mind you, I did have to sketch them a picture in the dirt of your fetching ‘questioning jumper’ ensemble and I can see how they could have become confused.”



He’d removed that particular eyesore while the Doctor was sleeping, leaving his best enemy in a nearly respectable dress shirt. If questioned, the Master would say wools were unsuitable to the climate, but really he just heartily loathed the article of clothing in question. The Master had left it on a tree branch somewhere in hopes some fashion victim of a bird would pick it apart to use as nest bedding. And then a predator attracted to the nest’s bright colours would hopefully eat that bird: fitting punishment for having made such egregious errors in interior decorating.



“The Cheetah just ate the pony?”



“Oh heavens no, Doctor, it lived a long, happy life, giving their children rides and teaching them lessons about caring for it, and for each other, before a tragic accident involving an open barn door and slippery grass cut short--- OF COURSE THEY ATE THE PONY!”



“They might have ridden it about,” the Doctor sulked.



“They have a breeding population of proper horses, as even you must have noticed while they were running you down on them. So why would they also need the Shetland for riding purpos—look, much as I want to have an argument with you about the relative load bearing capacity of a Shetland pony, how many hands high you can estimate the animal to have been from looking at this bone, average Cheetah size demographics and how astoundingly thick you are, have you noticed we’re on a different planet? Less desert, more deciduous?”



The Master felt this was the kind of solid rhetorical line he’d been groping for all day. Well, technically, back on the bone pile he’d been engaged in rather more literal groping, but if the Doctor’s mild concussion kept him from remembering that bit, so much the better. It would heighten the surprise of the Master’s next brilliant move!



“No. No, I didn’t notice our scenery change. Because before I could really take in my surroundings, someone thought it was incredibly necessary to knock me out. With a pony thigh. What exactly was your plan here? Going to wake me up, taunt me a second time, give me a few more smacks and see if it takes? One of us has rather a few regenerations left. I’d say at your current ‘attempts on my life’ to ‘Doctors you have offed’ ratio you’ve got a full morning ahead of you.”



“Something like that.” The Master brought down the pony bone he’d been tossing about the whole of the conversation on the crown of the Doctor’s skull with a sharp tap. “You talk too much.” The Doctor slumped forward onto the grass of their new home. The Master gave his impromptu club a victorious twirl. Later he thought he’d whittle it into a shank.






***







The Doctor woke up again, annoyed before the fog even cleared from his vision.



“Oh come on, twice in a row is just cheap.”



“Not if you fall for it,” echoed from some other corner of the--- cave? Were they in a cave now?



The Master strode into view, carrying what looked to be a freshly cooked dead animal wedged on a moss-encrusted twig and set it in front of the Doctor, pulling off a bit of it for himself and shoving it on yet another green-fuzz bedecked stick.



The Doctor looked at the dead animal. The Doctor looked up at the Master. The Master smiled, all creepy innocence and awkward over-sexuality, like a little girl in a pre-teen beauty pageant, and looked intently at the Doctor.



The dead animal* didn’t look at anything, being deceased. It had been a very perceptive sentient muskrat not long ago, though, and would have rolled its eyes if it could have.



“There’s still bits of fur and feathers on it,” the Doctor offered sadly.



“I caught it though! For you, even! Aren’t you hungry?” The Master’s voice was awfully expectant.



In the Doctor’s mind, a few salient points of the situation suddenly arranged themselves into a pattern. It was a lot like how, if you’re a paranoid schizophrenic, prices in the supermarket arrange themselves into coded messages from the government, instructing you to wear tinfoil hats in order to fight aliens. In the Doctor’s experience that never worked—he’d go with wax paper over tinfoil every time. But given that he was dealing with the Master, the Doctor thought the more mental the line of reasoning behind his conclusions, the better.



“Let’s recap our situation briefly. You have knocked me over the head.”



“Twice!” the Master interrupted proudly, but also because he appreciated exactitude.



The Doctor conceded the point. “As you say, twice. And you dragged me here—by the hair, I presume?”



“Now that’s wishful thinking on your part. It would certainly all fall out. I had to use the scruff of your neck. You’re a hard man to drag, Doctor.”



“Back to your cave.”



“I prefer lair. You’ll love what I’m going to do with the place.”



“And you are now proceeding to provide me with, er, meat. Your kill, specifically.”



“Oh come on, don’t be churlish, have a nibble Doctor—It’s like tandoori chicken if there wasn’t any chicken about and I couldn’t figure out what I could use as a spice that wouldn’t give us food poisoning. But apart from that, it bears a striking resemblance!”



“You do know what all of this looks like. I know you failed introductory anthropology but no one could possibly fail it this hard.”



“Yes.” The Master seemed unperturbed, and was now munching on his own unattractive meat-stick, having apparently grown bored of waiting for the Doctor to come to the appallingly obvious conclusion.


“So when, and this was just a few hours ago, mind you, your eyes went all raver-y and you said you wanted to destroy me…?”



“Patience Doctor, let a man finish his meat stick. I burned energy dragging you in here that I’m hoping to replenish before we get any good ‘destroying’ in.” The Master waggled his eyebrows.



There was a long pause, so pregnant it expected septuplets.



“Can’t you ever just ask me out on a normal date?” The Doctor shrieked. “The Cheetah Planet? For Rassilon’s sake, I just want to go to the Olive Garden and order Veal Parmesan or something! Instead I’m trapped for an unknown period on a planet of frankly ridiculous looking carnivores with you licking your fangs at me—goddamit Koschei! I just wanted some appetizers and white wine! Maybe a Bellini! Why in nine hundred years have you never done the decent thing by me and bought me a Bellini?!”



“But we’re going to unleash our animal passions!” The Master gestured frantically to the meat sticks as if they were instrumental in proving his point. “Make like cats in heat! Unleash centuries of our smoldering sexual tension, which, by the way, you’re a lot calmer about recognizing than I would have thought you’d be, I was betting on having to break out our friend the Party Rock again and just letting you sort of come to in medias res —I cooked you this quaint little meat stick, even!”



“Oh my god,” The Doctor pressed a hand to his brow, “this is worse than the time with the Magna Carta! I wait centuries for you to figure out your fixation with me by yourself, come to terms with it, and perhaps suggest a trip to the pub, buy me a few drinks, try for a drunken snog, attempt a smashed lay and follow it up with an ‘oh, I didn’t know what I was doing, I was just so wasted, but listen, now that you’re in my TARDIS why not just have a shower, I’ll do a fry up, and maybe you should move in, you know, just for convenience sake,’ arrangement. But obviously you are actually this stupid. I don’t know what I see in you.” The Doctor, all vexed out, turned away, twirling his meat stick desolately.



“We’ll get out of here eventually, Doctor.” The Master put a hand on the other man’s shoulder and squeezed it consolingly, inching his hand ever so slowly towards the Doctor’s vulnerable, erogenous neck.



“You don’t even know where we are!”



“No,” the Master offered, “But my TARDIS has a new homing function and it’ll find me within, I should expect, a few more weeks at the outside. We shouldn’t shift planets before then. We’ll be perfectly fine, if a little more rugged than we might have liked.” Well, than the Doctor would have liked. The Master had been rather looking forward to the dirty, sweaty bits of finally capturing the Doctor, but someone was being a killjoy—



“Oh,” the Doctor huffed “I can’t stay mad at you.”



“Yes you can,” the Master corrected, shocked, “Frequently for centuries, about the stupidest things, like anyone even misses Logopolis! The Math Planet!--” He hated pronouncing exclamation marks, but as that had been the planet's proper name before he'd decimated it he might as well get the nomenclature right-- he kind of owed it that.



“I can’t stay mad at you when we could be having long overdue, therapeutic sex,” the Doctor amended.



“Oh, well then.” The Master tossed the meatstuffs aside and proceeded to put their cave to good use, the patient hand resting at the base of the Doctor’s neck becoming rapidly more interested in the joys of undelayed gratification. “Let’s find out if the Cheetah Virus can be sexually transmitted.”



“Eugh,” the Doctor groaned, half in exasperation, half in enjoyment as the Master did something more inspired than any twelve of his Doctor-baiting schemes together to the Doctor’s torso. “Fucking Cheetah planet.”***






*Which had been a sentient flying muskrat-type creature named Bernaz. Unbeknownst to the Time Lords, he had been up for a promotion at work and in a very good place in his relationship with his girlfriend, Shernaz, before his life was tragically cut short by a black-garbed man coming at him with a rock**. At any rate he’d been too young and full of life to be reduced to a poorly conceived courtship offering, and all this really was a pity.


**in the desperate, flailing attempts to ‘make it die’ of the type of man who’d never before so much as seen raw chicken

***If there were a sequel to this it would be titled Ace Has Two Daddies. So thank god there never will be.

 
 
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GRITS in Misery: Close-up gritsinmisery on March 11th, 2008 09:37 pm (UTC)
OMG, this was so brilliant I needed TWO crack-pipes!

One teensy, grammar-Nazi pick: The past-tense of drag is dragged.
x_losficx_losfic on March 11th, 2008 11:03 pm (UTC)
*flail* Ah! You got here before I finished editing/formatting! It's like being caught changing!

Oh, I can't find it, would you mind telling me where the tense error is? God, me and tense errors OTP.
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 09:22 am (UTC)
ETA: Found and fixed, thanks!
metztlimoonmetztlimoon on March 11th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
Its like.. like what you'd get if Douglas Adams, Terry Pratchett and Rob Rankin all got together to write slash. It's wonderful!
x_losficx_losfic on March 11th, 2008 11:38 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I'm completely unfamiliar with Rob Rankin, and apparently wikipedia shares my confusion. Mind enlightening me? :)
metztlimoonmetztlimoon on March 11th, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
my fault entirely .... his full first name is Robert

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_Rankin
x_losficx_losfic on March 11th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
Oh interesting! I should clearly check this person out! Anything in particular you recommend? His list of works is dauntingly huge.
metztlimoonmetztlimoon on March 11th, 2008 11:52 pm (UTC)
The Brentford trilogy :)

Both he and Pratchett have taken a lot of cues from Douglas Adams, (as a side note I much prefer his work to Pratchett). A lot of the style in this reminded me of Adams and Rankin particularly - which is, imho, a damn fine thing.

x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 12:01 am (UTC)
Thanks, I'll throw this on the ever-swelling 'Books I Intend To Read And I Never Get To, My God College Stop Stealing My Freetime' Memorial Pile.

And Adams himself takes cues from Wodehouse, whom I love h-core. So anyone else in that literary lineage is probably a good bet!
schildkroete: loverkillingvail_kagami on March 12th, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
Loved it! I just did. Had to bit back my laughter because everyone is sleeping but, well, I nearly chocked.

You know the song 'Scullcrusher Mountain' by any chance?
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
Thanks!

Oh, I love Skullcrusher Mountain. *grins* It's so their ode.
Amy: master -> didn't tell youdawncrow on March 12th, 2008 03:34 am (UTC)
I was just going to ask the same question! This fic is so Skullcrusher Mountain! I love it! :D I haven't seen Survival and I know I need to, and this just makes me want to watch it more, haha.
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 03:43 am (UTC)
Also a vital question: Have you seen this fanvid set to Skullcrusher Mountain?

blinkidybah won my internets on this one.

Man, 'need to see' is such a dicey question with Survival, b/c basically you're going to be staring at your screen for ten solid minutes after going 'what' a la Tenth and Titanic.

I'm just surprised that I've surpassed even the crackiness of my Third/Master story. Who knew that day would come? o_0
Amy: master -> didn't tell youdawncrow on March 12th, 2008 03:49 am (UTC)
Yeah, I meant "need to see" in more of an "on my way to completing my Doctor Who indoctrination" sort of way rather than a "it's going to be an absolute masterpiece" sort of way, haha. Guess I could have made that clearer.

And yes, I have seen that fanvid. Many times. I pretty much watch it if I'm in a bad mood, and it cheers me up immediately. :D
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 03:54 am (UTC)
Ahhh. Yeah, it's a harrowing step in the process, but one we all have to take on our path to Truest Nerditude. But when you get around to seeing it you'll realize that the blond nagging woman at the end is SO a young Jackie Tyler, (whether or not that was the actual intention of the New!Who team, it's trufax), and it'll all be worth it. :)

Well... *wince* almost.
Amy: master -> didn't tell youdawncrow on March 12th, 2008 04:28 am (UTC)
LOL, I'll be on the lookout for her!
Bagheera: Acebagheera_san on March 12th, 2008 08:46 am (UTC)
You meant it to be "in medias res"?! *chortles*
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 08:49 am (UTC)
Oh I totally did. He's not above that--at least in this fic he's not. It's not wrong if he's perfectly convinced the Doctor's interested, is it? And of course the Doctor's interested! He just doesn't know it yet! The Master's helping, actually! Speeding up the process! Now where'd that rock go?
Chaos: Gallifreyorder_of_chaos on March 12th, 2008 09:52 am (UTC)
Ha! Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! HA! There's something about the Master knocking the Doctor out with a bone (a bone!), dragging him to his cave and offering him meat that makes me grin like mad. And the muskrat!   *cackles*   I love it.
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 09:58 am (UTC)
I love the idea of Master, for all his badassery, sucking at actually taking down the muskrat, flailing and trying to stomp at it and chucking rocks in frustration and maybe having himself a good temper tantrum. And then building a rough counterpoise trebuchet out of vines and twigs and calculating the angles and then feeling quite primal and manly when he does, indeed, succeed in (over) killing the muskrat.
Evilawyerevilawyer on March 12th, 2008 11:59 am (UTC)
This whole thing was hilarious, but this?:

Patience Doctor, let a man finish his meat stick.

Made me laugh so hard I was gasping and my stomach hurt. Fantastic job.
x_losficx_losfic on March 12th, 2008 02:54 pm (UTC)
Wow. Given my current stomach pain, perhaps without realizing it my entire purpose in writing this has been to inflict the same pain on the reader?! Freud would totally think that was true. But he was silly.

So glad you liked it!
Evilawyerevilawyer on March 12th, 2008 10:40 pm (UTC)
Ahh! Hidden and unrecognized motivation. With a goal of sharing the burden. It's a good thing, whatever Freud might have thought. It's like I always say: I trust (or love or whatever fits best at the moment) so much that I feel I can share my burden with you. Your burden, you can keep to yourself.

But truly, I hope your stomach feels better soon.
x_losficx_losfic on March 13th, 2008 12:39 am (UTC)
Ha, thanks. I hope so too. I've never had cramps wake me up from a solid sleep before. I didn't know the force was so strong with them? But yes, I will conquer them through the lulz!
Pretty Arbitraryprettyarbitrary on March 13th, 2008 02:47 am (UTC)
“Oh my god,” The Doctor pressed a hand to his brow, “this is worse than the time with the Magna Carta!

AH hahahahahahahaha!
x_losficx_losfic on March 13th, 2008 02:54 am (UTC)
Funny because TRUE. Worst date(s) ever.
rusty_halo on March 13th, 2008 06:21 am (UTC)
That was a lot of fun. :)
x_losx_los on March 13th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks, glad you enjoyed. :)
iyoku: silly hatsiyoku on March 13th, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
This totally made my morning. Nothing beats Jonathan Coulton references and Terry Pratchett-esque footnotes.

And to show my appreciation, I now subject you to my half-assed photoshop skills.
x_losfic: pic#70691356x_losfic on March 13th, 2008 06:32 pm (UTC)
Sweet, another morning made!

OMG FOR ME?! I ALWAYS WANTED--*cough* um, yes, thank you, that's quite lovely, I'll put it next to the my chotchkes and what little remains of my dignity. It will have a place of honor.
Calapine: seven; partners in crimecalapine on March 15th, 2008 10:44 pm (UTC)
Lols! That was cracktastically good fun, yes.
x_losfic: Gingerx_losfic on March 16th, 2008 10:57 pm (UTC)
Thanks, glad you had fun!
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x_los: Wedgwood Blue Treex_los on June 6th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
Aw, thanks so much! V. glad you enjoyed it.
aralias: ten is gleefularalias on June 28th, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
just finished watching survival and then pretty much the first thing i did (after watching ainley embarrassing himself horribly in the video game scenes attached to the dvd) was seek out this fic/its sequal which i had sensibly saving until i'd watched the story.

and it's great! this fic, rather than survival itself which was... hmm... kind of good sometimes and kind of not good other times. very like eight's tv movie actually which it does remind me of quite heavily.

the fic though is made of awesome. i laughed out loud at 'like anyone even misses logopolis' and the doctor looked at the master/dead animal didn't look anything section and sniggered silently through all of the rest.

you should write the crack more often. obviously you're too busy writing "anonymous" porn at the moment, but still - you write the crack most excellently.
x_los: Disconcertingly Hot Survival Ainley!Mastx_los on June 28th, 2008 11:59 pm (UTC)
LET'S NEVER SPEAK OF THAT VIDEO GAME AGAIN. Trust me: we will be happier.

I know re: Survival: it's like, there's some awesome potential and some cool ideas/good moments/old Ainley!Master still so clearly wanting to bang Seven and it's cute, but then there's a lot of wretchedness. Like, a lot.

i laughed out loud at 'like anyone even misses logopolis'

There was a joke at my house for a while re: that where, in an exceptionally ripe, fruity voice, you would trill "Logopolis! The Math Planet!" That is where this comes from. I have no idea why that phrase was so inherently amusing.

you should write the crack more often. obviously you're too busy writing "anonymous" porn at the moment,

Not at the moment, haven't written a damn thing all week. :(

Thanks!
aralias: master blissaralias on June 29th, 2008 06:29 pm (UTC)
did you actually play the video game? i'm vaguely intrigued. having onyl watched the master clips from it - i have no idea what the plot could possibly be and, yes, intrigued.

additional: i have tried reading that paragraph in your comment about logopolis several times and i still don't understand really what you're saying there. but i understand - private joke, now shared with the world! and the world approves.
x_losx_los on June 29th, 2008 08:29 pm (UTC)
No, no, I read the wiki, and that was enough.

Pfft. This is like the second time with you where something I've said has just been indecipherable word salad. I think I'm just going to back away slowly from the Internet.
Usually Kristanmiiro on December 14th, 2011 11:56 pm (UTC)
What video game?
x_losx_los on December 15th, 2011 12:53 am (UTC)
Usually Kristan: Retail stupidmiiro on December 15th, 2011 01:08 am (UTC)
0_0

That was painful.
x_losficx_losfic on December 15th, 2011 01:09 am (UTC)
We did warn you. Two years ago, even. :p
Usually Kristan: no umiiro on December 15th, 2011 01:12 am (UTC)
I read the text to your podfic because I'm no where I can listen to it, lol, so when you posted the podfic and the text, I read the text.

Hence! I just found this three year old fic. So it's new to me :P
x_losficx_losfic on December 16th, 2011 02:40 am (UTC)
I love comments on older things best tbh, it sort of reminds me they exist, and enough time's passed between writing whatever-it-is and the present that I think I'm fairer on them and like them better than I did just after I wrote them.
Alia: Mattlupinella on October 2nd, 2011 11:55 pm (UTC)
WOO-HOO!
This Is Happiness!!!!
And I'm completely sober.

Just found this WONDERFUL fic whilst strolling along the net looking for Seven!love [because others don't understand the sexy that is Sylvester. harumph], and wanted to give you a big THANK YOU!!
x_losx_los on October 7th, 2011 10:08 am (UTC)
Re: WOO-HOO!
I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it, I really love getting comments for older fic.
blackrose42blackrose42 on December 16th, 2011 03:27 am (UTC)
This is brilliant! I love it. Very clever.
x_losficx_losfic on December 16th, 2011 04:09 am (UTC)
Thanks, very glad you enjoyed it!
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